My latest creative endeavor, to become a published writer, and the trials and tribulations.

Wednesday, December 15, 2010

Back to book

To my utter astonishment, I am actually halfway through the rewrite of the 2nd book. I maintain this book is stronger than the first. It feels fantastic to be writing again! My plan, when finished with this rewrite, is to find a writing class, possibly at PCC, and attend book publishing fairs in the hopes of generating interest and meeting the agent or publisher that can make things happen for me.  I also really want to learn screenwriting because when this is finished, I have a great screenplay in the works.

Last week and this, my fantastically great friend Jeni Bellcour, who lives in Denver, and with whom I grew up in Minnesnowta, is in California for work. We've been able to see each other twice at length and she will come to stay with me on Friday before she leaves early Saturday morning. It's been so fantastic to spend time with her! We saw the movie Tangled, which was really good! I love how kids movies always have a lot for the adults to enjoy these days. For us, we get double the pleasure by getting in touch with our inner kid and enjoying a few sophisticated jokes just for us on the way. In this pose, she is mirroring a statue which is behind her, but I had to cut the statue out to make the picture smaller.



The day after Jeni leaves, my mom will visit again for a few days before she catches her ship for Around the World again this year. We'll have a bit of Christmas and do some shopping.

My house has really taken shape. Most everything is done, but I decided to do a bit more painting. One wall in the living room (purple, of course) and some trim in the bathroom (red and gold). Going to try to get that done before Mom comes to visit. Also, my bed frame still isn't built. Probably will do that between Christmas and New Year, when there are less students.

Started a great family with 3 kids last night. 2 piano, 1 violin, but I think the older girl wants to play violin instead. I hope she does. Seems like she'd be happier with that. Have 2 more beginning cellos coming on board in January, and a returning student from a few years ago, a boy I absolutely adore and have missed a lot and I usually don't take kids back and he plays guitar, but I adore this kid so much that I'm going to take him anyhow! I just hope I can fit him in the schedule. He'll make #43.

And now I present...a little teaser from Book 2:

“I think it’s time I met your family,” Jack Franklin said to the love of his life, Elizabeth Hennessey.


She scoffed. “Why?”

“You’ve met my family!” he reminded her. For two blissful weeks over the holidays, they went to Jack’s family estate near Reading in Berkshire in England. His parents died several years ago, but she met his sister, her husband and her two daughters and several other members of his extended family. “When is the last time you talked to them?”

“I talked to Dad last month for about a minute.”

“And the others?”

She shook her head.

Jack couldn’t imagine having so little contact with his family. “You haven’t seen him in how long?”

“Last summer. And you haven’t seen your family in three months either.”

“Lizzie!” He clicked his tongue. “I can’t imagine that, you know. Not seeing your family on purpose.”

“Well…you like your family.”

“You really don’t like any of them? Why not?”

Elizabeth sighed and played with her sandwich. “I’ve already told you a lot about them. My mom isn’t nice, and my dad is a pushover; my little sister is a troublemaker, Charlie is completely withdrawn and aloof, and Will’s in Denver at school and he’s a stuck-up snob. I don’t really get along with any of them except Dad.”

“They all seem to have glaring faults, don’t they?”

She grimaced at his implication. “I don’t have anything in common with any of them.”

“None of them are musicians like us?”

“I think Charlie plays a little guitar. But no.”

“So, they’re not like you; they don’t like music. Don’t they have any redeeming qualities?”

She stared at him and stated, “You think I’m judging them.”

“Even murderers have something you can like about them.”

“Oh, don’t even say that,” she scoffed.

“It’s true.”

“Yes, but at the very least that makes my mother less likeable than a murderer!”

“There’s got to be something about her you like.”

“No. I really can’t stand her.”

“Do you love her?”

“Of course, she’s my mother but that doesn’t mean I have to like her."